catherin66

Hello Adam,

也讓Panda try try ㄅ; 如下:

櫻花樹上的芭蕾舞者

The Ballerina on the Cherry Blossom (Sakura) Tree

初春，一隻可愛的綠繡眼(Japanese white eye)，在櫻花樹上尋找美味的花蜜，忽然，看見上方有一株盛開的櫻花，立即展翅、跳躍而起，那姿態，像極了美麗的芭蕾舞者。

In the early spring, a dainty Japanese white-eye was seeking scrumptious nectar; all of a sudden, a fully-blossomed sakura above caught its eye, and immediately it extended its wings and hopped up, looking very much like a graceful ballerina.

*dainty = 玲瓏可愛

*鳥名建議用dash (-)來做串連

*scrumptious = 美味可口

*同句分割得用逗號

*文裡沒說到它的性別, 所以不建議用he 或 she

*cherry blossom是櫻花的正式英文, 而sakura是取於日文譯音, 在美國也大有人知

*姿態的英文是posture或posture, 但硬用在句子裡或破壞整體的優美感, 所以我沒把它放進去

*graceful = 優美的

希望有幫助..